你的“留学动机”是这么写的吗？ 留学动机信的目的在于让申请者清楚地表述个人的基本情况、申请学校及专业的原因，以及未来的职业构想
是出国留学的小伙伴留学申请必不可少的一个文书文件，同样如果你的留学动机信写得出色，对于你的留学奖学金的申请也是有很大帮助的
下面跟随海优君的脚步来看看，写好一篇留学动机信需要注意哪些要点？ Let’s go! 留学动机是你留学的源动力 留学动机信的三点要素 1 个人的基本情况 与个人简历不同，这里的个人基本情况是要着重表述个人的学习和工作期间的主要业绩
2 申请原因也就是申请的动机 明确阐述申请某某学校以及某某专业的理由，要告诉校方这个学校为什么吸引你，学习这个专业对你有什么帮助
为什么选择去该国留学 3 未来职业计划 具体说明在毕业之后，你准备从事的工作
切忌使用贡献、奉献、报效之类空洞的词汇，而应该表明去什么企业、公司，在什么职位上负责什么工作
也许很多学生会说：以后的事情现在怎么能知道 ? 其实，学校就是想了解你是否有明确的求学目的，并允许学生有根据、符合逻辑地设想
海优君说一句 学习不是工作报告 不要把自己 习以为常的思维方式 用在重视实际 的外国人身上 一切从实际出发！ ——HY留学 特别事项 在申请高等商学院的时候，学校还会特意让学生谈谈自己的优缺点和性格特征
留学动机信一定要具体并且全文贯通，有前因和后果，按照西方人的说法就是有逻辑性
在撰文时，一定要以具体事例配合你所表达的中心思想，使文章显得生动
总之一句话：具体、生动、逻辑性强、中心思想明确 HY留学 范文展示 这里呢，海优君特意拿出一篇优秀的“出国留学动机信”的范文让大家可以有所参考，结合上面海优君所讲的三大点
希望能对小伙伴有有所帮助！ Faculty of Electromechanical Engineering, Guangdong University of Technology, No. 100 Waihuan Xi Road, Guangzhou Higher Education MegaCenter, Panyu District, Guangzhou China, 510006 Dear Mr. /Mrs. : I appreciate that you can take time off your busy schedule to read my letter. This is a letter of my motivation to apply for the Master degree of Precision Manufacturing(MPM) of University of Applied Sciences of Southern Switzerland (SUPSI). First, allow me to introduce myself. My name is Liu Yang. I ’ m a first grade postgraduate of Guangdong University of Technology(GDUT). My major is Mechanical Engineering and Automation. I get my bachelor’s degree in Mechanical Engineering and Automation at Wuhan University of Technology in 7thJuly, 2007. After I graduated from my university, I worked in Jiangling automobile joint-stock company for about 1year. Then I took the Postgraduate entrance examination and was enrolled in GDUT at last. There are some hearty reasons why I like SUPSI and the major of MPM: First,I am interested in MPM, for I have been studying in Mechanical Engineer- ing and Automation since I started my university life. It ’ s well known that this major plays a foundational role of the developing of industry and it is easy for us to find a job.MPM, in my opinion,is a similar major with Mechanical Engine- ering and Automation.Exactly speaking, it’s the specialization and concretion of Mechanical Engineering and Automation. MPM in SUPSI based on a set of prominent and well balanced lectures that not only promote individual profess- nal skills and cultivate their ability but also their creativity, management level and shape attitude. I think I can get more professional knowledges than I can get inland and extend my knowledge fields to enhance my competitive strength. Second, SUPSI can offer me good teaching quality. SUPSI is one of the eight Universities of Applied Sciences in Switzerland.The institution focuses on education based on professional need and on applied research, and , at the same time, it provides a practice-oriented education and offer a wide range of master’s programs. The educational goal of MPM in SUPSI is to shape new professsional figures characterized by reseach and operate skills through aneffective training path constantly merging reseach and education. For my part,I prefer practice-oriented educcation to pure reseach-oriented. Third, SUPSI can affords me a good environment to study. According to Global Competitiveness Report 2009-2010, Switzerland ranked number one among a total of 131 surveyed countries.It ’ s a reflection of a world-class capacity for innovation, combined with a highly sophisticated business culture. The country has a well-developed infrastructure for scientific reseach,with close collaboration between the leading research centersand industry. What’s more, the top-notch infrastructure, well-built education and health care systems as well as clean and beautiful environment all provides a safe,conve- nient, comfortable and healthy living environment for me to live and study. Additional, SUPSI gives a preferential tuition fee. The institution cooperates with our university.Due to the cooperation between the Chinese and Swiss governments on this project,the fees are low.I think choosing to study in SUPSI can lower the financial pressure to my family. Furthermore, after graduating from SUPSI, I will become more competitive and enjoy a more positive prosp- ect in future job market. Finally, thank you for your reading again. I am seriously interested in studying at your university. What I care most is, whether I can be accepted by you, I wis- h! Looking forward to hearing from you and with best regards to you! Yours sincerely, L** Yang 海优君寄语 为了小伙伴，海优君也是拼了
拿出了珍藏的私货奉献给大家
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